His vision is perfectly fine
but still
he is blind.
He does not manage to see,
all the stuff that matter to me.
He shuts me out
he makes me sad,
I have really never felt this bad.
Someone gave me a good advice;
you should open your eyes!
I should leave,
I should go
but
I love him so!
In response to Raymond Carvers "Cathedral"
1 comment:
Good rhytm in your poem. It's nice to see the poem from another point of view. Well done
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