This page displays creative writing by Norwegian college students taking a 1-year English course at Nord-Trøndelag University College in Levanger, Norway.
Thursday, February 5, 2009
Spinning Feet
Spinning feet In brain in head of thoughts instead his brain is talking his feet are walking
He thinks of action but misses traction he can't be winning his feet are spinning
Good, Emil. Also a bonus that it rhymes. Leaves me thinking actually. Seems like the person is confused, but I'm not sure what you meant when you wrote this. But isn't that the meaning of poems? Again, very good!
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Good, Emil. Also a bonus that it rhymes. Leaves me thinking actually. Seems like the person is confused, but I'm not sure what you meant when you wrote this. But isn't that the meaning of poems? Again, very good!
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