This page displays creative writing by Norwegian college students taking a 1-year English course at Nord-Trøndelag University College in Levanger, Norway.
Thursday, February 5, 2009
Losing spree
His eyes are sore His hands are hurting No air to breathe No memories to think The battle is lost
4 comments:
Well chosen words Kristoffer!
You seem to have thought of what words to use, and I also like how you put in the nouns.
eyes
hands
air
memories
battle
Excelent work!
Thank you, Emil. It's feels nice to get such comments.
Very good work, Kristoffer. You impress me=)
short but sweet! captures the most important aspects of the text! well done.
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