Thursday, February 5, 2009

Cathedral

His so inseCure
While I’m sitting here Alone
I can see The look on his face
FrigHtening and frustrated

He blamEs me for everything
I Don’t know why
DRugs and alcohol
Might be the reAson

I think i wilL say good bye now..

(In response to Raymond Carver's "Cathedral")

3 comments:

LKK said...

I really liked your text, especially that you highlighted the letters from the title.
Good job!

OJF said...

Yoy seem to be a good learner. Nice. I liked your response to "Cathedral" very much!

OJF

Kristine said...

This was very nice, Lill Tove. You made me want to read the poem because you highlighted some of the letters. Good work :)