Tuesday, February 10, 2009

Car Crash

Taking and breaking
lives
Causing and leaving
sorrow

Lucky?
then injured for eternal days
Most
have walked their final ways

If I knew
it was the last time I saw you
If I knew
I would never let go

So sudden
so little I could do
Forever in my heart
I will always miss you

Drive carefully
and beware
Those who are left behind
are those who wish you were here...

In response to Auto Wreck

3 comments:

Piffings said...

Very nice, Maja:)

Lill Tove said...

Very good Maja:-) youre a good poem writer.

anita said...

Like your poem and the unusual setup gives it the little extra.