I have never felt like this before. The pain, the sorrowness, the blood, the death. Oh, how it hurts! My hands are sore, my back is aching. Everything are so heavy. I remember when I first came here. All the faces. All the scared faces. Now the faces are gone. Bang! I'm alone. The sun is shining.
In response to "How to Kill"
2 comments:
It feels like I'm in the situation. Very describing! I'm impressed. Keep up the good work :)
this is actually a good one! i like the way you manage both to repeat and to change your words..
very nice balance here!
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