Tuesday, January 27, 2009

KILLING...

You can kill a man with one shot.
But strong is the one that shoots not.
Because he can see
that all – you and me –
together can manage a lot .

Killing can all do without!
It just causes fear, tears and doubt.
I have lost some faith
with humans at late
‘cause of wars that the news tells about.


In response to “How to Kill” – Keith Douglas

4 comments:

Kristin said...

This was a lovely poem, Eirin! And you say you don't like creative writing?! Well done:-)

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maja said...

Wow, you are very good at writing poems, Eirin! It is easy and fun to read when you put it in rhymes like this, and you managed to it well, because this makes a lot of sense. :)

maja said...

*to do it well, of course ;>