Wednesday, January 28, 2009

After the war

I'm freezing cold and empty
oh, the days before you came
now my memories are all back again
I try to pass through the gate of sleep

the stars changing into darkness
the sleepless eyes
inside my head lives an old scene
I watch the storm go through my mind

today I offer all myself to this
I tried to make it go away
I've lost track of logial thinking
... I shoot myself
and my blood tells all

now it is the most devine
freed from my thoughts
my words are cold
my scars remind me
the past is real

I tried...

2 comments:

Kristine said...

I really liked this poem, very nice.

Camilla said...

Wow.. This was really good! I liked the part about the gates of sleep, well said. And also the part about how our scars remind us of the past.