Sunday, January 25, 2009

Goalie

In response to Rudy Thaubergers "Goalie"

We went to practice
We used to have fun
It was all about playing
We didn’t care
As long as we had fun

Time has changed
The fun is over
You cared too much
They said you had the courage
And you agreed

Today it’s more critical
It’s all about blood and fear
I can see the fear in your eyes
The fun is over
I wish we could start over

We used to have fun…

2 comments:

kari said...

I think you have made a very good poem.

tar said...

I also think you have made a very good poem. I am impressed. Edith